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~~ In This Issue of the Update: ~~
1.
It's Our "The Least We Can Do" Sale!
2. The Next Step on the Path - Who Is Your Reader?
3. Cool Free Tool: Massive Database of Children's
Publishers
4. Here's What's in October's Children's Book Insider...
5. Featured
Children's Lit Blog: Cynsations
6. New on the Blog....Plus, Our Podcast is Up!
7. Southern Breeze Children's Writing Conference
Set for Birmingham, AL
8.
Feature Article: The
"Why" of a Character

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>> ITEM 1 -
It's Our "The Least We Can
Do" Sale!
Fun times, eh?
Well, we've been through challenges before and we'll get through this but, in
the meantime, every penny is getting squeezed that much harder. I
honestly have no idea how to solve the financial mess, but I know one thing I
can do:
Give you guys a big discount so you can use the money you
save on other stuff you need.
So here's the deal -- 20% off across the board on
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Look, if you're meant to be a writer, you're gonna keep writing. And
kids will need books as much -- or perhaps more -- than ever, so don't stop
now. For goodness sakes, keep at it people -- and keep educating
yourself about the changing publishing world.
Maybe you can't get to that conference or take that big workshop, but you can
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Book Insider (6.5 pennies a day, to be exact, with this discount) or picking
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discount). ;)
>> ITEM 2 - The Next Step on the
Path - Who Is Your Reader?
Let's continue our series which will take us, step-by-step, from absolute beginner to published author.
The topic of the previous issue: How Do You Define Success? If you missed it, you can read it
here: http://write4kids.com/update92408.html
This month, we'll work to nail down just who our audience really
is.
Too often, when we think of "writing for children", we
imagine we're doing exactly that: writing for all children.
Or perhaps we've narrowed it down to an age group. But, if you say you're
writing for middle schoolers, are you really writing for all middle
schoolers? Pretty unlikely.
Consider this: The best advice for creating a character
for your book is to have a full dossier on that character crafted in your head,
or perhaps even on paper. How old is she? What kind of clothes does
she wear? Does she live in a particular part of the world? What does
she like? Dislike? What's her favorite school subject? What
does she like on her pizza? and so on.
Now the character is more than an abstraction, she starts to
become real flesh and blood.
So here's the trick to finding your target reader:
DO THE EXACT SAME THING.
Before you start your manuscript, create two
"characters" to represent your potential readership. One boy,
one girl. Give each one a name. Imagine their age, their physical
appearance, the way they speak and how they dress. Think about what they
do with themselves in the hours not spent reading your book. Who are their
friends? Who are their antagonists? What else do they
read? In what kind of house or apartment do they live? And, most
importantly, what are they looking for when they pick up your book? To be
entertained? Enlightened? Scared? Tickled pink with
laughter?
Don't start writing your book until these two youngsters truly
become real to you. Now, start writing your book for them.
Forget the publisher, forget the editor, forget the (hopefully) millions of
other kids that will ultimately read your book. Write this book for those
two kids.
Not only will the task ahead seem less daunting, you'll start
feeling -- almost immediately -- a new connection with your readership.
And that translates into something every good editor will pick up on
immediately: a writer who can reach across space and time and
connect with young readers on a one to one basis.
Want to discuss your target audience and
your children's writing journey? Visit our message board at http://write4kids.com/wwwboard
and chat with other writers. I've created a special section just for
Updaters to share their thoughts about this article. Registration to use
the forum is free and takes just a few seconds.
>> ITEM 3 - Cool Free Tool: Massive Database of Children's Publishers
I really love Jacketflap, a social networking site for
children's lit folks. It's a fun place to hang out and connect with all
sorts of people, and it offers an astonishing freebie: a massive
user-maintained database of children's book publishers that you can access
immediately.
Now, it's not a replacement for the absolutely essential and
fully-researched Children's
Writers & Illustrator's Market guide, but it's a heck of a complement.
Thousands of publishers are included, and a typical listing
includes contact info, some description of the company, editorial policies and
top editorial staff, as well as charts and graphs that break down the
publisher's output by genre and age group. if you scroll down in each
listing, you'll see direct links to another free database that describes
recently published books by that company, so you can get a real feel for exactly
the types of books they're seeking.
Let's be clear -- for accurate, up to date info, you should be
using Children's
Market, but this works beautifully hand in-hand with that book. And,
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>> ITEM 4 - Here's What's in October's Children's Book Insider...
"I
won a subscription to CBI at a conference few years ago. I've been renewing
ever since -- 450
magazine and 4
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books and over thirty-five articles later, I’m still subscribing and finding Children’s
Book Insider as useful and inspiring as ever.
" Lynne Stover
"Thank you so much! I can't imagine not subscribing to CBI and still taking
myself seriously."
Lynnmarie May
If you're new to the Update, you may not know that we publish a monthly
subscription-only newsletter for aspiring and working children's book writers
that's jam-packed with market leads, advice, inside info and much more. It's called
Children's
Book Insider, and
we've been sharing it with subscribers across the globe since May, 1990!
Here's a look at what's in the current issue of Children's Book
Insider, the Newsletter for Children's Writers:
Market Tips:
* Publisher Seeks Unusual Classroom Activities for Grades 5-12
* World History Magazine Accepting Well-Researched Fiction, Nonfiction
* Submission Updates: Boyds Mills, Bloomsbury, HarperCollins, Lerner Publishing Group, Simon & Schuster
* Publisher Seeks High-Quality, Fresh Fiction and Nonfiction
In-depth Articles:
* Literary Agent Offers Advice
- Join our newest contributor, uberagent Daphne Unfeasible, for some straight talk about getting
published!
* The Perfect Symmetry of a Picture Book Plot
- An eye-opening look at exactly how to structure a winning plot.
* Writing Your Fears
- How to take your own personal fears and translate them into a book that will help children.
* 5 Megatools for Smashing Writer's Block
- Stuck? We'll get you unstuck in a jiffy!
* Study the Magazine Before You Submit
- How to break down a magazine's content and website to maximize your chance of acceptance.
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you see what we've got in store for you each month in the pages of
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>> ITEM 5 -
Featured
Children's Lit Blog: Cynsations
In the past couple of years, there's been an explosion in
wonderful blogs about children's books and the writing process. Now, in
each issue of the Update, we'll profile a unique and helpful blog.
This issue, we highlight Cynsations, the blog of
author Cynthia Leitich-Smith. Cynsations is one of kidlit's most
widely read and respected blogs, and with good reason. It's chock full
of interviews, publishing news, links and recaps of the best of the
blogosphere and lots, lots more. It's a wonder to behold and an
absolute must-read.
Here's the link: http://cynthialeitichsmith.blogspot.com/
PS: If you have or know of a blog that
should be featured in the Update, drop Jon a line at jon@write4kids.com
Also, if you happen to come across a children's writing blog or site that
doesn't list the Children's Writing Update, The Children's Writing Web
Journal (http://write4kids.com/blog)
or Write4Kids.com
among its links or resources, why not send a friendly note telling them about
us? We'd really appreciate it!
>>>>> ITEM 6 - New on the Blog....Plus, Our Podcast is Up!
If you haven't visited our blog recently, it's time to catch
up on all the good stuff we have posted there. Just click the links to
go directly to the posting:
Wise Words About Description
- really great advice I picked up from my son's social studies teacher.
A Simple & Fun Writing Exercise
- something really helpful for voice, point of view or just to have a good time.
Cybils Awards Now Open for Nominations
- the kidslit blogosphere now has a buzzworthy awards program. Learn how
to nominate your book for a Cybil Award.
All Together Now: How Group Blogs are Changing the Writing Scene
- Band together with other authors to cut through the promotional fog!
and.....
We're Podcasting! Yes,
the Write4Kids Podcast has finally arrived. The first one is up for your
listening and dancing pleasure. It's entitled 5 Reasons Why You Can’t Become a Writer….and Why None of Them are True
Go lend an ear....
The Children's Writing Web Journal Blog is found at http://write4kids.com/blog
Please visit and subscribe so you can keep up with all the posts.
>>> ITEM 7 -
Southern Breeze Children's Writing Conference Set
for Birmingham, AL
The Society of Children's Book Writers and Illustrators (SCBWI)
Southern Breeze regional conference will take place October 17-18 in
Birmingham, Alabama.
Entitled "Light Your Creative Fire", the conference
will feature a keynote address by Award-winning author Paul Fleischman. Other faculty includes Martha Mihalick, Associate Editor at Greenwillow Books, Lindsay Davis, Agent at Writer’s House, Andrea Welch, Beach Lane Books
, Laurent Linn, Senior Designer at Simon & Schuster, and Harold Underdown, Author of
The Complete Idiot’s Guide to Children’s Book
Publishing.
For more details, visit http://www.southern-breeze.org/
>> ITEM 8 -
Feature
Article: The "Why" of a Character By Laura Backes, Publisher of Children's Book
Insider
A subscriber recently wrote:
I have just received a rejection letter from a large publishing company. In it, the editor states she enjoyed reading of the main characters' friendship, but "there isn't enough internal development in their characters to fully engage the reader in (made-up names) Amy's struggle and Jo's fight to save her." Can you help explain exactly what this means?
In my workshops I like to talk about the "why" of a character, and my best guess that this editor is saying you haven't demonstrated why your characters are acting as they do. Every person has their own unique way of dealing with the bumps and bruises of everyday life. If five 14-year-olds each wake up late for school because their alarms didn't go off and Mom's already left for work, two would get dressed and rush out the door, one would move slowly in order to miss the math test he didn't study for, one might call Mom in a panic, and the last would take the day off. But we can't guess how each kid will react until we're familiar with his or her personality. The same is true for fiction.
The situations don't dictate the characters' actions; the makeup of each character dictates how he or she will move through the story. If the events are more important than the people living them, the story falls flat. But even more than basic personality traits, I think this editor is talking about the emotional "why", as in Why should we care? Have you revealed enough about Amy so the reader will be invested in her story? Are there things about her life that the reader can relate to, or empathize with? Is her conflict believable and something the reader will find important? Have you established the connection between Amy and Jo, so that when Amy's in trouble, the reader understands why Jo would want to help? Is it clear what each character stands to lose, and is this potential loss dramatic enough to keep the pages turning? Without knowing the characters' motivations, their fears, dreams and demons, the reader can't judge if Amy's struggle is worth the fight or if Jo's efforts are honorable.
Finally, remember that in all good fiction the protagonist grows or changes through resolving the conflicts of the plot. How have Amy and Jo changed from the beginning of your story to the end? Are those changes satisfying to the reader? Asking yourself tough questions like this as you're revising your manuscript will help you show the reader why your story's worth reading.
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