
TIPS FOR WRITING MYSTERIES by Laura Backes, Children's Book Insider
Mysteries are very popular with middle grade readers. They are
generally fast-paced stories that build self-confidence by
allowing the reader to solve the crime. Simple mysteries for this
age group follow a clear formula where the author lays out clues
for the reader in a predictable fashion, using escapes, setbacks
and coincidence. The Nancy Drew and Hardy Boys books fall into
this category.
As readers become adept at solving mysteries, they reach for
books that require careful scrutiny to discern clues. Goody Hall
by Natalie Babbitt and Mystery of Drear House by Virginia
Hamilton are good examples. The following are tips to keep in
mind when writing mysteries for children.
* Unlike other types of children's books, the child
protagonist in a mystery does not go through major character
development during the story. His or her character must be strong
at the beginning of the book, and have qualities the reader will
identify with or admire. However, one of the protagonist's
character traits (such as having a photographic memory) can be
used to solve the mystery, as long as the readers know about it.
* Another difference between mysteries and other types of
fiction is that in mysteries there is little or no underlying
theme to the story (such as loneliness, peer pressure, etc.). The
plot drives the story, and the conflict and tension is derived
from what happens to the main characters from without, rather
than what's going on inside themselves.
* The child in the story must be as smart, or smarter, than
the adults. Adults can help in certain situations in order to
make the story believable, but the child must uncover the major
clues and solve the case.
* The clues to the crime, as well as the crime itself, must be
accessible to children in real life in order for the story to be
realistic. This also helps the reader solve the mystery. A child
would not know, for example, how someone could alter the brakes
on a car, but he or she could probably figure out how this was
done to a bicycle.
* The reader must have access to all the clues available to
the protagonist. It's not fair for the author to withhold
information.
* It helps if the author rehashes the entire crime and rounds
up all the clues at the end of the story. Often this is done by
the protagonist summarizing the crime to another character right
before solving the case. This will remind readers of the clues,
and give them a better chance of coming up with the solution on
their own.
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