
CHARACTERS: THE BUILDING BLOCKS OF FICTION by Laura Backes, Children's Book Insider
All good fiction starts with characters. Characters are the
central focus of your story; they control the plot, causing its
twists and turns and ultimate resolution. A mistake many writers
make is conceiving the plot first and then plugging
one-dimensional characters into this storyline, simply moving
them from point A to point B. This results in a flat story void
of any emotion. Even the most thrilling adventure won't appeal to
readers if they don't care about the people involved.
Though the idea for a story (it's theme or message) or the
events that comprise the plot may be the first things that spring
to mind, take time to develop your characters before you start
writing. Many authors write out a detailed character sketch or
biography, listing both physical (include gestures, facial
expressions, etc. as well as physical appearance) and personality
traits. Dig deep: What is this character's greatest fear? His
worst nightmare? His proudest achievement? This kind of
background is important for any type of character, including
talking animals. Avoid stereotypes or ready-made characters
(those your reader has seen before).
Once your character is firmly established in your mind, have
him or her encounter a conflict of some kind. The way this
conflict is resolved depends on who your character is, which is
why the background work is so important. The resolution, which
must be brought about by your main character, depends on this
character's unique set of strengths and weaknesses. The above
paragraph illustrates the basic plot outline of your book.
Underlying all this is the story's theme, or message. You never
state the theme to your reader, but it should be evident by what
your main character has learned, or how he or she has changed,
during the course of the book. Since there are only a handful of
themes out there, what will make your story stand out is how your
particular character has handled his or her personal conflict. If
your characters are original, your plot will be original as well.
This kind of character development is also important for
secondary characters. Though you won't be showing as many aspects
of their personalities as with your main character, you'll find
yourself implying many of the traits that make them unique. In
this way, each of your characters is an individual, and the
secondary characters won't all blend together in the background.
With short stories, picture books and easy readers, the plot
tends to focus on one or two aspects of the main character's
personality (fear of the dark, jealousy of an older sibling).
Chapter books, middle grade and young adult novels have more
complicated plots, and explore greater dimensions of character.
Often sub-plots bring out smaller conflicts the main character is
facing that relate to the larger plot. In novels the characters
tend to be about the same age as the reader or a year or two
older. Picture books can feature characters of any age, as long
as the conflict is something a child 4-8 years old would care
about, and character has a childlike view of the world. (For a
more intensive study of characters and exercises on character
development, see Character Workshop by Katherine Ploeger, The
book cost $15.95 plus $3.75 shipping and can be ordered by
calling 1-800- 807-1916.) Remember that your characters, whether
they be a child or an animal, must act consistently with the
personality you have given them. They must deal with the conflict
in a way that is true to themselves, and can't use knowledge or
experiences they wouldn't have simply because it's convenient to
the plot. In this way, your characters drive the plot and the
story's outcome. Once your characters take on a life of their
own, you may find your story heading in a direction you never
anticipated. Let it go. If your characters are real and
believable, they may take you places you never dreamed possible.
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