The point of view -- how you choose to tell your story --
determines the voice of your writing. Children's stories are told
from the viewpoint of your main character. Who this character is
-- his or her personality, temperament, strengths and weaknesses
-- will affect how the story is told.
Whichever viewpoint technique you choose also impacts the way
you develop your main character for the reader.
First person: The first person viewpoint uses the "I".
Your main character is telling the story in his or her own words.
This point of view allows the writer to easily show the
character's personality because every thought, feeling and
opinion expressed in the narrative comes from that character. The
author must know the main character very well before starting the
story; a flat, undeveloped character will not hold the reader's
interest. The limitations to this viewpoint are that the
character must remain actively involved in the story at all
times, otherwise he ends up standing on the sidelines and
describing the action in long, telling passages. Physical
descriptions of the main character come through dialogue from
other characters ("I've always loved your curly hair, "Sue
told me) or by the main character comparing himself to another
person (I have my dad's blue eyes). Rarely does a character stop
and describe herself for no reason.
When working in first person, you can only show the thoughts
of your main character, and you can only see the events your main
character sees. The thoughts of other characters must be
expressed through dialogue. First person, past tense is the most
common, and effective, narration technique. Some young adult
novels use first person, present tense, but avoid using this in
picture books or novels for young children because it is
sometimes difficult to read as it sounds like everything is
happening simultaneously. (I am running down the walk I open the
gate and step into the yard.)
Third person, subjective: With third person you use the
pronouns "he" and "she," but you are still
telling the story through one character's eyes. You get close to
your main character by showing only his or her thoughts and
feelings and following that character through the story, but you
don't have to write the narration as if it's coming out of your
main character's mouth. This is often the easiest point of view
for beginning writers to master. Be careful not to comment or
editorialize upon your character's actions (Billy should have
known better), or speak directly to the reader (Can you guess
what happened next?). You as the author must remain invisible so
your readers can immerse themselves within the world of your
story.
Omniscient: The omniscient point of view is like looking at
the story through a movie camera. You can show the reader what's
happening in several places at once, but you don't get close to
any one character or see their thoughts. This can be useful at
the beginning of a chapter to set the scene (as E.B. White does
in Charlotte's Web), but after a paragraph or two switch to the
viewpoint of your main character. An entire book written with the
omniscient point of view does not allow the reader to identify
with any one character or know whose story you are telling.
While most children's books encompass one main character and
one point of view, some young adult novels alternate points of
view between two or three main characters. This is best done when
entire chapters focus on one character and one viewpoint. It's
difficult to do this successfully in books for younger children
unless each character has a very different role in the book, and
you are a talented writer (as in Natalie Babbitt's Tuck
Everlasting).
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